I love the background, it looks so desolate. <3 Sometimes it was hard to keep up with the story, because it changed between past and present tense. I usually get someone else to proofread my story to avoid mistakes.
I hope you'll make a sequel (or a prequel!), the prince is an interesting character. I want to know more about his past and mission!
Hii thanks for playing <3 and glad to hear you enjoyed it!
Thanks for the heads up, I didn't realize i kept switching between past and present. I hope to expand on the prince's story once I have things figured out :)
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I love the background, it looks so desolate. <3 Sometimes it was hard to keep up with the story, because it changed between past and present tense. I usually get someone else to proofread my story to avoid mistakes.
I hope you'll make a sequel (or a prequel!), the prince is an interesting character. I want to know more about his past and mission!
Hii thanks for playing <3 and glad to hear you enjoyed it!
Thanks for the heads up, I didn't realize i kept switching between past and present.
I hope to expand on the prince's story once I have things figured out :)
Interesting story! There were some typos here and there, but I'd be interested to learn what happened to the Prince.
Hii, thanks for playing my entry!
So far, without revealing too much, the prince failed his mission which resulted in his and his knights's death. That's why he's very bitter.
will you be expanding this with another VN or is this the end?
As of now I'm still thinking what I'll do. I love the prince and the knights, but I'm still not sure of my direction for his story.